Haikus for the Senses
Sound
The raven calls
His great wings flapping
up silent streets
One Deep Breath posed a challenge this week for the senses. This image has been dreamlike in my skull since I saw it a week or so ago. Looking out my bathroom window, I heard a raven call and then it flew past in the fog -- it's wings moving the air. A moment later its mate followed again with a call and then the wings flapping the air. Maybe this one should have been a haibun to really convey what I wanted to say. Nevertheless, the haiku is good. I'll have to think of some other senses haikus before the end of the week and add them.
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7 comments:
Wonderful 'ku. Clear image, very evocative.
Ravens are such magnificent birds. I love the fact that other than the raven the street is silent. Very evocative.
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I like this very much. Crows and ravens are special to me, and it sounds like they might be to you, too.
Beautiful haiku! I wanted to call it evocative, but that's been said.
Wonderful!
I love this. Good image!
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